Craving

I'm not sure I like this one. This is the start of another, heck I don't even know what you call it. But I just don't think it flows well together. It's not finished. What do you think?

1) Trash it and start over

2) Keep it and finish

3) I don't care and why are you asking me?

A fragrant scent wafts through the room
Vanilla candles, rose potpourri fill the atmosphere as
Dimly lit streaks of fire flames dance upon the mirrors gaze.
Uncloaked figures entwine exposing their very being

The radiance caressing bare thighs
The luminance stroking exposed breast
Passion Burning through the mirrors reflection

Moans and whispers break the scents
As the two figures breathe in the air

‘Take me’ she pants as he pulls her close, lips parted
Inhaling her very essence. Enchanted by her pulchritudinous.

Their eyes close as his hands etch to her cheeks
His lips soft as he explores her mouth plump with desire.
She kisses back feeling the tenderness in his touch as his tongue caresses hers.
He pulls back gently and benevolently kisses her once.
His smile perfect and easy as she slowly opens her eyes.
She reaches up to him. Her hands wrap around him and she renders into him. She gasps for breath as her body recedes into the craving
She coils her leg around his thigh and presses into his manhood. Hunger rises to her core.